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A poem I wrote, from an original one my classmate Ahana wrote, standing at a private Beach near Pondy this morning. (she wrote >90% of it) . Rays of amber sun on a sky so blue, Rolling white surf on the golden sand I see azure for all that is true, Arise, awaken, my mighty land.

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  1. Better rephrased as:
    White rays of sun through a sky so blue
    Rolling white surf on the golden sand
    I see azure for all that is true,
    Arise, awaken, my mighty land.

    I know the syllable count is not right but the pic shows white rays of sun and not amber

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